Children are now watching more television than they have ever done before.
What are some of the negative effects of children watching a lot of television? Do you think young children should be allowed to watch television?
It is common nowadays for children to spend hours watching television. watching TV excessively can have negative impacts on both children's physical and mental development. From my perspective, I think young children should have a time limit for their screen time
Long hours of watching TV can lead to serious health issues in children, such as deteriorating vision, chronic neck and back problems and obesity. Too much screen time can lead to poor posture which results in chronic neck and back pain, whereas sitting in front of a screen for too long could lead to a more sedentary lifestyle in the future which in turn results in obesity. In addition to health issues, excessive screen time could also affect a child's mental development. All the time spent in front of the TV could lead to an increase in suicidal behavior and lower one's ability to read emotions.
Because of the negative effects TV has on children, it is better to limit children's screen time. While it is difficult to do so, there are several ways in which parents could help to reduce their kids' watching time. First, parents could use parental controls to set daily screen time limit that can lock their children out of apps after they reached a set amount of time. Moreover, parents should also encourage their children to get involved in other activities that don't require a screen like playing sports, reading books or playing board games.
In conclusion, excessive TV watching can lead to various problems in children's development such as health issues and , therefore, we should limit their screen time.
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- Children are now watching more television than they have ever done before What are some of the negative effects of children watching a lot of television Do you think young children should be allowed to watch television 56
- Children are now watching more television than they have ever done before What are some of the negative effects of children watching a lot of television Do you think young children should be allowed to watch television 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97744360902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52850322602 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1164322211 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201111741752 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104816354148 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081026133719 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15833908784 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859641566584 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.