some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged .Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults
People have different views with regard to the question how children should be oriented to become useful adults in the future. It's argue by some that the rivalry among children is essential to develop a young person's mind and body. However, I strongly believe that cooperation is the key to success.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the competitive aspect of children should be encouraged. Firstly, it motivates them to work hard to achieve success. For instance, Ronaldo has trained hard to compete with other players before be coming the world's top footballer star. Secondly, a fair and healthy competition can build confidence and strength in children. It's due to the fact that In the fight, they will learn to accept defeat and and overcome it as well as be proud of of their achievements.
On the other hand, I believe that a more cooperative environment develops children more effectively. Firstly, children can lean soft skills such as listening, communication,.. From collaborating with other children. Specifically, children work as a team member in the family, school is a good opportunity for every child to speak out their opinion or even lead teams at work as an adult. As an result, collaboration skills will help most Jobs in the future. Secondly, Cooperation fosters a sense of community and togetherness which is important for social development.
In conclusion, while competition among children can be beneficial to some extent, I believe that cooperation is more important than competition for a peson to become succes in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14453125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98208098596 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7932411066 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35440124758 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108144494131 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873676101633 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220641802651 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433903449348 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.