The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Science has become one of the most vital parts of today's world. It is widely believed that the purpose scientists pursue and put in priority is to better human lives. From my perspective, I totally agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, there are plenty of significant inventions resulted of science bringing the public lots of benefits. From the dawn of time, people have an obvious view of how essential these inventions have been, such as lights, televisions, and phones. They all have their own functions and assist people in many different fields, ranging from education to medication curriculum. For example, with the frantic effort of medication experts and scientists, the vaccines from science experiments can cure many patients from the death disease in the Covid-19 pandemic and help many nations overcome this difficult curriculum.
Furthermore, many scientist spend all their life dedicating to bettering and improving people's lives. After their death, they are respected by individuals and well-known all over the world, including Einstein and Thomas Edison. Apart from these people, who did not have any dedication to human beings or just pay attention to the nature of science as finding new things from the world without making these benefits to the public may be criticized. Although people have the right to do anything they want, however, it is widely supposed that scientists have a vital role in making society better and becoming a prosperous nation.
In conclusion, science is an indispensable part of the world and brings many positive impacts to society. I myself believe that bettering peoples' lives is still the most important role of science in today's society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ESSENTIAL_ESSENTIALLY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
...ime, people have an obvious view of how essential these inventions have been, such as lig...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...heir own functions and assist people in many different fields, ranging from education to medic...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scientist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many scientists'.
Suggestion: many scientists
...s difficult curriculum. Furthermore, many scientist spend all their life dedicating to bett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26102941176 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68588508654 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3192294969 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177379851763 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675025318042 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554509101726 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117286004877 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308431142466 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.