It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the current era, how to balance success and failure is a critical point of discussion. From where I stand, I believe keeping happy and positive when fail to our goals is an essential part in our life. I feel this ways for two reasons which I will explore further in the following passage.
To begain with, a positve attitude towards failure is conducive to pave the way for the next success . It is important to change our own mindset from depressed or self-doubting to optimistics, which could help us to analyze the resaon of failure and make a reasonable plan for the future in a calm and analitical manner. For example, I used to fail a chemical examination in my high school. I felt extremely down and disappointed to myself after receiving my score, and I had been in that passive mood for a week. But after that, i realized that I could not be the slave of negative emotion and becoming positve was the source of energy to fave any challenge. As a result, I began to analyze the reason behind the mistake, absorb knowledge that I did not command, and even make a plan for chemical learning. I strived for the success in subject study with a positve mindset, refusing to be dominant by unnecessary emotions.
Secondly, holding a positve mindset contribute to mental health. Nowadays, there a increasing numbers of patients with psychological problems, as they could not control their attitude facing the failures in life. My brother's experience provides a compelling example to illustrate this point. My brother used to operate a techonology company. Unfortunately, the company was bankrupted at the downturns of economic depression. This failure hit my brother harshing, causing him could not fall asleep everyday and eveutally was diagnosed depression. But what was lucky that my brother's mental statement became healthier thanks to doctor's encouragement and scientific treating. My brother told me that what benefits him most is to using a positve attitude to face any hinders and failures as negative mood threatens people's health which is the based of success.
In sum, I still believe it is much essential to maintain happy and positive when we unsucceed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95355191257 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85377045692 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560109289617 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8513283129 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4210526316 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137059346048 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403118512139 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038152821948 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953839345171 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301191600184 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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