Some people say that music plays an important role in society while others believe that it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
music has long been a subject of debate regarding its significance in society. while some argue that music is merely a form of entertainment for individuals, others contend that it plays a crucial role in shaping and reflecting societal values. This essay will explore both perspectives and provide an opinion on the matter.
Those whose view music primarily as entertainment emphasize its personal and recreational aspects. firstly, music serves as a source of enjoyment and relaxation for individuals. it has the power to uplift moods, provide solace, and offer an escape from the stresses of daily life. secondly, music is a form of self-expression and creativity, allowing individuals to explore their emotions and communicate their unique perspectives. Lastly, the music industry contributes significantly to the economy, providing employment opportunities for musicians, producers, and other professionals.
On the other hand, proponents of music's societal role argue that it goes beyond mere entertainment. firstly, music has the ability to evoke emotions and connect with people on a deep level. it can serve as a medium for emotional expression, allowing individuals to find solace and understanding in shared experiences. secondly, music often reflects cultural identity and heritage, preserving traditions and fostering a sense of belonging within communities. Additionally, music has historically been used as a platform for social and political commentary, raising awareness about important issues and inspiring change.
In conclusion, while music undeniably provides entertainment and personal enjoyment, it also plays a significant role in society. it serves as a means of emotional expression, cultural preservation, and social commentary. Therefore, it would be an oversimplification to view music solely as a form of individual entertainment. Its impact on society is profound, as it has the power to unite, inspire, and shape societal values. Thus, music should be recognized as both a source of personal pleasure and an influential force in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70873786408 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39911218053 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4531779127 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328407057357 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932011292444 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663405856422 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207390121225 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506575671735 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.