Some feel that governments should prioritize health care instead of other important areas. To what extent do
you agree and disagree?
In the competitive world, health is considered as the biggest asset of anyone which represent a breading ground of success for an individual as well as for Society. Nevertheless a number of people beleive that government should consider health care as the most important sector rendering other sector whether it be education agriculture .While I disagree that government investment in health care are great importance. I feel the adequate funding in education and environment Sector is equally essential for betterment of society which I will discuss in comming paragraph.
To commence with one of major demerit would be increases of old age population in a country Although grey hair people are more experience in their life, they have primitive mindset always have the new fear of adopting technology . However funding on education Sector have great return of Investment as compared to healthcare because this will help the young generation to get familiar with advance of technology which eventually proves itself to be of a great benefit for development of society and individuals. For example despite having highest ageing problem , Japan Still rank number of in term of advance technology because of Investment in eduction sector. Thus, & funding in academic field is much more efficiently then health care.
Furthermore, Secondly spending a number of money in health field proves itself great harm for enviornment as it incline the life expectancy of people lead to Overpopulation in a particular area which Eventually increased the demand of natural resources . To fulfill the supply government have Spent a lot funds which result as resources depletion. Authority need to spent the money, related sector such as sustainable development which save environment by using wind energy and Solar energy and save resources for the fortune generation. For instance due to overpopulation of people in particular area, India suffer the most the demand of recourses are high which result resources depletion Hence, there is need to Invest for environment sector.
To conclude with, Although health sector is an essential to Survive in this Society, yet other such as education field can't be ignored as It promote the modern technology which is beneficial for the economic.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35754189944 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.908618094 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533519553073 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1043620011 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.833333333 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110190222461 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477701939249 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698696370329 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768211394337 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663492361555 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.