The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned
future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant
The provided maps illustrate an industrial area that is a part of a town called Norbiton in the present day compared with its projected redevelopment in the future.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the goal is to make this area become less industrial and transform it into a residential neighborhood with extra housing and additional amenities.
Currently, there is a central roundabout surrounded by factories and connects two roads, one is the main road in the south of the map and the other leading to the east with houses on each sides. In the north of the town, there is a river running from west to east out of Norbiton with a farmland situated to its north.
According to the proposed plan, the southern end of this area will feature a school while the playground is set to be constructed in the north and it will also have housing on either side. Morever, there will be two new roads splitting off from the roundabout. One is going to be built in the north of the roundabout that will pass over the river with housing located on the western and another road will head towards the northwest from the roundabout with housing alone one side and at the end of this road.
Outside the center of the town, the farmland will be replaced by additional housing with a parallel road set to be constructed and linked to the northbound road. Futhermore, the redevelopment plan also entail the addtion of a smaller roundabout where the south road currently meet the main road in a T-intersection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72014925373 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7554271161 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481343283582 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1779110289 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.555555556 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12540068323 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625066339011 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052674040184 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897929229669 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498573133374 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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