Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give advantages of each and support your viewpoint.
Human beings are the sole species who have the ability to think and communicate through various languages. It is in our nature to learn something new- be it about the world we live in or a new language.
Learning foreign language in the country in which it is spoken has it's advantages. Language changes as you travel from one part of the country to another. In fact, one language can have so many dialects. In case one learns Arabic from an Egyptian, he will know how to recognize the different pronunciations and changes in the language as you go to different Arab speaking regions. Our pronunci...
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