More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
There is an increasing trend of moving to urban areas for a better standard of living in some countries. However, living in the city is not as easy as common thought as there are some major drawbacks. To improve city life for average inhabitants, I believe that governments should take action with specific strategies.
Apparently, it is unavoidable that people may have to face some problems when they choose to settle down in metropolitan areas. The first problem is the high cost of living. Along with better living conditions, such as high-quality goods or health services, the money required to spend in a city is higher than in the countryside. Therefore, it may put numerous people, especially the young, under high pressure. In addition, job opportunities for city residents are not always available. Many cities witness the wave of migrators that results in an overloaded workforce. If someone does not have a well-informed background, outstanding ability, and flexibility in work, they cannot find a suitable job with a high salary. Take Ho Chi Minh as an example. Every year, the city records a large number of unemployed people, many of whom have to accept manual jobs to earn money without contract or labor insurance.
Under these circumstances, I believe that there are various measures that governments could take to bring a better life for their inhabitants. Firstly, the authorities ought to facilitate the disadvantaged people to pay less fees for essential demands such as healthcare. Secondly, there should be some incentives for projects that support them by providing financial aid or creating jobs. For instance, in Japan, especially during Covid-19 pandemic, the Japanese government decided to spend a large amount of money from its budget to decrease the financial burden of enterprises. Also, governments could alter the policy to protect the rights of those objects that may prevent them from labor exploitation and wage arrears.
In conclusion, although city life can yield certain benefits, people should be aware of its negative effects. Accompanying residents, country authorities could implement a range of solutions to enhance the quality of city life.
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- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 89
- City life More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 784, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...n example. Every year, the city records a large number of unemployed people, many of whom have to...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun fees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ilitate the disadvantaged people to pay less fees for essential demands such as heal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28080229226 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94689911862 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6529411752 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318126343827 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866169084579 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072350499942 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206123285769 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774020262162 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.