The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The graph shows the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005. The horizontal scale consists of the countries along with the year and the vertical axis comprises of the number of magazines sold pr person.
The blue bar represents the number of magazines sold in 2003, orange represents the number of magazines sold in 2005 and the pink represents the projected sales in 2007. As seen from the graph, the number of magazines sold in 2003 in country A and B is close to 50 but it is significantly dropping as we go from country C to country E, with around 38 magazines old in country C, about 19 sold in country D and around 5 sold in country E. However, a minor reduction in sales is seen in countries A, B and C in 2005 when compared to 2003, with around 45 magazines sold in country A, about 48 in country B and around 35 in country C. But in countries D and E, a minor increase in sales is observed in 2005 with a sales of about 20 in country D and around 8 in country E. The projected sales for 2007 shows a significant decrease in countries A, B C and E, with around 38 in A, around 45 in B, around 33 in C and around 5 in E. However, in country D, the projected sales shows a significant increase to around 25 in 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...ong with the year and the vertical axis comprises of the number of magazines sold pr person....
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... number of magazines sold pr person. The blue bar represents the number of magaz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 33.7804878049 178% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12653061224 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57937224588 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.351020408163 0.547539520022 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1554324599 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.375 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351962075431 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2174277381 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806654914636 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320586125467 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260876066151 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.87 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.27 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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