Many people worry that innovative technology will supplant humans in all future workplaces, whether industrial, administrative or creative. Others, however, insist that while technology is an invaluable tool, it could never replace people.
Discuss both views and present your opinion . Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write an essay of at least 350 words .
In this ever-changing world, technology is widely believed to be an indispensable and bring a range of benefits in the foreseeable future. While some people claim that technology will assist them in every fields by some cutting-edge developments , others , however , argue that people can take controls of these hi-tech technologies. From my perspective, I firmly believe that this breakthrough bring both beneficial effects and drawbacks for the following reasons.
On the one hand, I would agree with those who think that developments in the field of AI will bring about positive influence on our lives in the not so distant future. Thanks to the prevalence of technology, especially robots , industrial proportion has increased dramatically in comparison with those in the past. For instance, with some workplaces requiring hard work and time, or tedious ones , workers are easily be substituted by advanced technologies and machines in order to provide a large amount of productivity. Next, by using ChatGPT- an artificial intelligence tool, people can take much advantage from it . Students can search or find information quickly and be responded in just a few seconds. Therefore, they could integrate this advance into their students’ work and assignments to save time and have a wide range of material resources. Another example is that breakthroughs in satellite and spacecraft technologies, scientist will be able to make more precise predictions about extreme events , such as asteroid collisions or violent storms, which might threaten our lives on earth.
On the other hand , although the technology is developing rapidly in this day and age, human values and intelligence should be preserved and improved. Since human are who invented these advances , they might take control and make good use of those to ingrate into lives for various purposes. Moreover, technologies , especially robots can not be suitable enough to substitute teachers in teaching students. To be more specific, robots and technologies are being controlled by people so they are not able to have different sensations , thoughts and feeling as good as real teachers. People are more suitable than robots in lecturing and sharing to children .
In conclusion, breakthroughs in technology are believed to play vital role in our current lives. People can gain a lot of advantages by using technology, however, the importance of human should not be ignored. Therefore, as far as I have mentioned, individuals must carefully make decisions to balance both pros and cons .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40201005025 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09470878898 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2732132809 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.444444444 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183084261614 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056166531153 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447556842769 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119423997032 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347030694698 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.