Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

There would always remain a discrepency in regard to human activity and its impact on earth. Some people believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. On the other hand, others feel that human activity makes the earth a better place to live.

First of all, there are some people who believe that human activity had affected the earth negatively. According to them, human beings have had contributed to a major extent in polluting the earth. For example; with the invention of modern trasportation system like cars, buses, trains...etc. Earth Pollution has obviously increased as a res...

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Sentence: There would always remain a discrepency in regard to human activity and its impact on earth.
Error: discrepency Suggestion: discrepancy

Sentence: Moreover, they also believe that human beings have also encroached the nature to accomodate their demands.
Error: accomodate Suggestion: accommodate

Sentence: In my opinion, although pollution is considerd a major problem.
Error: considerd Suggestion: considered

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