Some people think learning history in school is important. Others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that both history and subjects relating to life play an important role in school curriculum. While studying history is essential, it is my belief that other subjects about social life are more crucial.
Admittedly, development of a sense of identity could be regarded as the major reason for the importance of studying history at schools. From an educational perspective, principals incorporating teaching of history into their school curriculum can make students comprehend historical events. Such an advantage could also mean that if educational authorities make an informed decision about emphasizing on history in school timetables, the young can appreciate their culture and foster a sense of national pride. In Vietnam, for example, there are plenty of historical exhibitions made by the young to express the culture, customs and history of their country of origin.
However, in my point of view, involving the teaching of subjects relevant to life can be obviously more essential due to their benefits which would bring to school-aged children when they go in life. On a personal level, with this kind of major becoming part of their learning, students can advance in terms of social skills, as a result, they would come out of their comfort zones to have better relationships, which could contribute to an improved quality of spiritual life. On the societal level, by putting more resources and giving higher status to the major relating to daily life, young individuals can definitely have a broader view of life and personal resources to draw on when they reach adulthood. If this were the case, they could be provided more job opportunities and career progression which lead to an improved quality of material life and therefore a thriving economy.
In conclusion, it seems to me that subjects which relevant to life can be more important than history in school curriculums. It is thus hoped that the educational authorities should emphasis teaching and studying of this kind of subjects at schools.
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- Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future Others think they should focus on academic study only Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think learning history in school is important Others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng of this kind of subjects at schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22865853659 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8791192072 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8856970736 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.916666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215899453264 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975404585362 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791278694249 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165096833733 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727205494644 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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