More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In many parts of the world, there is an increasing tendency for people living in rural areas to move to major cities in order to improve their quality of life. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of living in urban areas, solutions can be taken by the governments to tackle the potential problems.
There are a number of problems when living in major cities. The first issue worth mentioning is the air pollution. It is true that in big cities, factories and vehicles release huge amounts of carbon emissions into the atmosphere every day, which cause citizens to suffer from some serious respiratory diseases such as lung cancer or asthma. Another problem that should be taken into accounts is the high unemployment rate. This is due to the fact that there would be numerous people competing for a position. Therefore, residents who lack essential skills and qualifications could not find a stable job in a city and may be likely to commit a crime.
In order to address the problems mentioned above, several actions should be taken by the authorities without any delay. Firstly, urban government should impose higher tax on factories who have poor records on carbon footprint and invest more money in projects to find alternative sources of energy that are environmentally friendly. Therefore, this could help mitigate the rising level of air pollution in cities and protect public health. Secondly, more public spaces such as parks or squares should be constructed to provide places for people to engage in leisure activities, reducing stress as well as improving their physical health.
In conclusion, despite some obvious disadvantages of city life mentioned above, authorities could make necessary efforts to make urban life better for city-dwellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23958333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78635611183 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8982921884 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321222424029 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916796949216 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990277371947 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214187555967 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117696141721 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.