Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Zoos have remained a contentious subject of discussion and deliberation among various stakeholders over an extended period of time. Some would argue that zoos don’t serve much of a valuable intention. In my point of view, however, zoos have numerous benefits in various aspects.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some believe zoos bring no helpful usage. The first reason is that keeping animals confined in small enclosures is cruel and unnatural. They believe that animals in zoos suffer from mental and physical health issues due to the lack of freedom and space. Another reason is that In captivity, animals can lose their own natural instinct. For instance, a tiger has to hunt other animals in the natural environment but if it is locked up in a zoo for too long, it will gradually lose the ability to hunt and defend itself.
On the other hand, in my perspective, I completely agree that zoos bring much helpfulness to animals. Firstly, zoos play a crucial role in conservation efforts. Many endangered species are bred and protected within zoo environments, ensuring their survival. These efforts help to maintain biodiversity and prevent the extinction of certain species. Secondly, zoos provide valuable opportunities for scientific research and education, allowing visitors to learn about different animals and their habitats. Zoos also contribute to raising public awareness about wildlife conservation and the importance of environmental preservation.
In conclusion, although some people think that zoos serve no beneficial objective, I personally believe that It is crucial for zoos to contribute to conservation efforts, and educate the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39543726236 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94109351828 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9674508048 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301169574089 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963671236034 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690290533942 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192079985461 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049379610234 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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