Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes of environmental damage? Who are responsible for preventing environmental damage?
In the fast-pace modern life of these days, the vast majority of countries in the world have to face environmental deterioration which can be attributed to several reasons. To address this problem, it requires a combination of efforts from both the government and individuals.
On the one hand, numerous activities of human in the world cause the damage of environment. To commence with, one of the most major reasons is industrial development, which has detrimental effects on either water or forests. Humans directly discharge waterwatse into the sea and rivers, resulting in the extreme water pollution. In addition, the forest has been destroyed recklessly for a lot of purposes of human, including entertainment and timber extraction. The disappearance of forests causes climate changes, floods and drought for example. Furthermore, Greenhouse effect is also a main reason for environmental deterioration. Excessive carbon emissions are released into the air from burning fossil fuels, including from vehicles, causing air pollution and damaging the atmosphere.
On the other hand, government plays an essential role in preventing environmental destroy; however, it is not solely the responsibility of government. Initially, the governemt has responsibility of implementing regulations related to environmental protection, and banning strictly organizations or individuals breaking the rules intentionally. In addition, citizens should be aware of the dangers when the surroundings are deteriorated, consequently, following the regulations and taking actions to protect environment even from the simplest ones, littering in the designate locations for example. Moreover, government should encourage citizens use public transportations or use vehicle with renewable energy. When individuals support these encouragements from government, effects of the greenhouse on environments can be mitigated effectively.
In conclusion, the problem related to environmental damage, happening in almost all countries, results mainly from the industrial activities. However, I believe that with the effort of both government and each of individual, our surrounding can be prevented from deteriorating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03525641026 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50133668239 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612179487179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6811854773 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268535922214 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794170987061 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076732438112 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139972167497 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550225184273 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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