Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport.
Write an email to your friend. In your email
recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn
explain how your friend could learn this sport
suggest that you both learn this sport together
Dear Tom,
I write this letter to discuss more about the advice that you ask me about learning a new sport. Honestly, I firmly believe that you should enhance your physical health, because as you can see you are a little overweight now. By doing exercise like football, basketball, badminton and so on you can easily lose weight as you wish. I am a football fantasy so that I may help you with this kind of sport.
To me, football is quite an easy sport to play for people all around the world, and many famous footballers like Messi, Ronaldo, and Rivaldo are qualified for a good education, but they are all the legends of football in the world. You can be a better footballer if you have a sense of patience and do extra practice than others.
As I mentioned above, I really love football so I can be your guide or a partner to help you get familiar with this case and we can play on a daily basis together in the afternoon at the weekend. My house is quite close to the football yard in the town and I suppose that we can play there for our convenience. As a matter of fact, this sport is a team-player sport so we need more friends to make it more enjoyable. Feel free to bring some more friends if you like because the more the merrier.
What do you think about this idea?
Hope to hear from you back soon.
Your friend,
Nguyen
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- Your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport Write an email to your friend In your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn 73
- Your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport Write an email to your friend In your email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your friend could learn 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, may, really, so, i suppose, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29527559055 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31752027862 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9317084181 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9230769231 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183310130137 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854161957389 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11566951082 0.0603063233224 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067141814539 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557977311267 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.