Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant example for this.
In this period of modernity, a number of people believe that an enormous salary is much more vital than job satisfaction. With the increasing cost of living and the urge to live a luxurious lifestyle, people are more inclined towards high-paying race. However , in opinion, I strongly disagree with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.
Supporting my disagreement, I firmly believe that career satisfaction is the key to a happy and fulfilling life. Money can buy materialistic things on the contrary it cannot buy happiness. It's only act as an enabler. To cite an example, a person may earn high wage, on the contrary if the work is monotonous and unfulfilling, it can lead to a stress and dissatisfaction.
Furthermore, a person who is happy with their work are less likely to suffer from stress, anxiety and depression. For instance, a study conducted by University of Dhaka, the employee who are satisfied with their position are 12% more productive than those who are dissatisfied.
Explaining another supporting point in favor of my disagreement, it is true that a vast salary can be tempting, but it frequently comes at a cost. High-paying position are usually demanding with longer working hours as well as tight deadlines, which can lead to burnout and affect work-life balance. As a consequence, it can lead to affect relationships and further increase stress levels.
In conclusion, I strongly accept that job satisfaction is more essential than a huge salary. While money is essential for survival, it is not the only factor that contributes to fulfilling life. I hold that aforementioned points are strongly supporting my viewpoint.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17625899281 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1902500778 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1232458244 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141733864954 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468066325948 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069066192193 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766111354033 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589348722958 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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