The graph shows the number of oversea visitors to three different areas in an European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the number of foreign tourists to three distinct destinations, namely the coast, the mountains, and the lakes in an European nation from 1907 to 2007.
In general, the three categories showed an upward trend over the period examined despite some fluctuations to varying degrees. Additionally, the cost generally remained the most common area among oversea visitors.
At the beginning, the number of visitors visiting the coast stood at 40 thousand, higher than that of the other segments at the same time. This figure, then, witnessed a slight decrease to reach its lowest point at roughly 35 thousand before leaping to its peak at about 75 thousand at the end of the period surveyed. Following the similar trend, the number of foreign visitors coming to the mountains started at exactly 20 thousand, which was twofold lower than the figure for the coast at the same time. Following this, the mountains witnessed a gradual increase in the quantity of oversea guests, with the figure being around 35 thousand in 2007 - its highest point throughout the time of period.
In contrast, the 1907s recorded only 10 thousand foreign visitors patronizing the lakes, lower than that of the others at the same time. However, there was a dramatic growth of nearly 65 thousand visitors visiting this destinations, with a subsequent fall reaching to its lowest point at exactly 50 thousand visitors at the final year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... coast, the mountains, and the lakes in an European nation from 1907 to 2007. I...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...of nearly 65 thousand visitors visiting this destinations, with a subsequent fall re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10924369748 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62165194964 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9654493337 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.111111111 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123345895755 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632375831136 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480256442995 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993274445107 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546151470804 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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