Many companies use popular sports events to promote their products. Some people think it promotes sports in a positive way while others think that it has a negative effect on sports.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Sports events have always attracted a lot of attention from enthusiastic viewers, which have opened certain opportunities for business people. Whereas one part of society is inclined to think that promotion of goods demonstrates sports in a good aspect, others believe in the negative consequences of this phenomenon. I do believe that the former mentioned opinion makes more sense due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
Famous advertisers possess fabulous budgets that allow them to turn common sports watching into a real holiday. All World Football championships are inextricably linked with the name of the company producing various drinks, and its emblems might be seen everywhere in stadiums. These illustrious sponsors pay for the singers’ performances, beautifully decorated seat zones, fireworks and other attributes of the celebration. For example, I was lucky to enjoy the Formula 1 final in Singapore from the Peroni brand zone and this is one of the most unforgettable days I have ever had. Thus, sponsorship is a great way to create an atmosphere of widespread fun and joy at sporting events.
Although some opponents believe that promotion through sports leaves a bad impression on it, I doubt this opinion. On the contrary, advertising budgets permit athletes to render charity work for the general benefit of society. Many sportsmen are willing to employ their names and popularity to help and inspire people around the world. As a result of this partnership with major brands and material cooperation enable them to turn this intention into reality. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the richest footballers in the world, is an ambassador for the Save the Children foundation and he regularly transfers large amounts to them. Hence, the contribution of advertising money to the possibilities of sports with charity should not be underestimated.
To conclude, I believe that the interaction of sports and product’s promotion carries a lot of positive aspects. Although some people think it has bad influence, I value the special atmosphere of the holiday and the opportunities for charity that are possible due to this phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38823529412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05749971354 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614705882353 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2562349518 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257568006645 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768746381533 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568000406203 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161002638247 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398041947424 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.