A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The basic purpose of education system is to groom students with respect to his cognative and mental capacity. Education also helps to identify the hidden abilities of the student and prepare them for their future life. Curriculum, thought in schools, are the source of imparting knowledge and information. By standardizing the basic curriculum or source would certainly lead to produce students with same level of confidence, knowledge and information that is in agreement with above statement.
The standardization of curriculum provide opportunity to measure the students performance on national level. Most of the nation announces scholorship for intelligent and high grader students. when the curriculum is not standardized then it would be difficult for the governing body select the appropriate student for scholorship program. The uniformity also help to create interprovisional competition. This uniformity and standardization can be observed at developed countries like ameria, europe and australia etc.
The other advantage of the uniformity of curriculum is the induction of same principle, concept, values and attitude in student. The researcher may find the same level of discipline, knowledge and attitude of students belong from two remote regions. when one region provides foused study on subject of economics and other region provides balanced approach between science and economics then there would be huge difference between knowledge of students and therefore, in knowledge of entire nation. The economic focused student may find himslef inferior and outdated then the other one. This deficiency may also hinder in selection of career in college life. To avoid the elementary problems, there should be uniformity in national curriculum.
The introduction of same curriculum creates equality in society. It create same employement opportunity for middle and upper class of the society. This uniformity strategy provide opportunity to narrow the gap of poverty and richness. The world has become the global village now. The educationist can come up with the idea after his research work that when the curriculum of first world countries like usa, europe implement in schools of africa then the results would be unimaginable and the dream of poverty elimination from africa come true.
The under developed countries do not posses the system of standarad curriculum system not only at elementary stage but also at higher levels. Due to this defficiency when any national scholarship is announced then with their academic result they also need to submit some international recognized test like GRE, GMAT, TOEFL, ILETS ets. All these international test are build on concept of standardization. It can be noticed that the more the educational system is weak and not uniform then the adoption of these test are more frequent.
conclusively, national curriculum are not only source of equality within nation but also create sense of harmony in entire world. To provide the equal opportunity of learning would not only beneficial for student but also make positive impacts on nation's literacy and economic growth level.
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Sentence: The basic purpose of education system is to groom students with respect to his cognative and mental capacity.
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Sentence: Most of the nation announces scholorship for intelligent and high grader students. when the curriculum is not standardized then it would be difficult for the governing body select the appropriate student for scholorship program.
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Sentence: The researcher may find the same level of discipline, knowledge and attitude of students belong from two remote regions. when one region provides foused study on subject of economics and other region provides balanced approach between science and economics then there would be huge difference between knowledge of students and therefore, in knowledge of entire nation.
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Sentence: The under developed countries do not posses the system of standarad curriculum system not only at elementary stage but also at higher levels.
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Sentence: Due to this defficiency when any national scholarship is announced then with their academic result they also need to submit some international recognized test like GRE, GMAT, TOEFL, ILETS ets.
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