In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a fact that people in many nations, currently, have longer lives compared with the previous generations. There are different perspectives about whether the ageing population is beneficial to a nation or not. Personally, for any region, the drawbacks of having more old people than younger ones will be far more than the benefits. This essay will discuss both sides of the problem.
On the one hand, some people believe that there are advantages if the community has more people coming from previous generations. First and foremost, no one can deny that the more time people live, the more knowledge they gain. It is a good strategy for an organisation to have groups of the elderly who play as senior advisors to help make decisions. Since those people accumulated significant knowledge about the world, they may be the ones who directly witnessed the variations of mankind, such as the development of information technology. Moreover, the elderly can act as grandparents who help parents take care of the children so that mothers and fathers can spend all their efforts on their work.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the disadvantages of having too many ageing people in a region will outweigh the advantages. Firstly, people who are out of the golden age can be affected by serious dangerous diseases as their health will not be as good as used to be. This may intangibly create a financial burden on the government as they have to spend more expenditures on healthcare systems. Consequently, the state has to decrease tax levels and increase pension support for the elderly because they do not have adequate ability to work as effectively as the youth. Secondly, this will also decline the number of labourers in the country as this group of society cannot maintain the productivity of the work like the next generations. Consequently, those countries may face a decline in economic growth.
In conclusion, both groups of discussion do have their reasonable supportive ideas. However, I firmly stand on the side of people who think this development will bring more drawbacks compared with the benefits. This is because too many people who are in the elderly population may unintentionally decrease the economy of scale of a nation and create a burden for the state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98429319372 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84210260483 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510471204188 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2568001285 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353137246421 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1093648119 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739034283827 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226346549896 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274188086295 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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