Problems of city life
In our modernized society, we have witnessed a lot of changes in the daily life especially in term of living in cities. There are so many problems of this tendency that we can not up-to-date easily. Firstly, big cities are always overcrowded, which leads to traffic jam. For example, when we hurry to go to work in rush hour, we will angry and uncomfortable because of waiting. Moreover, we can not clam down to drive in the right way. This will result in lots of accidents in the street. The second issue of cities is that it has lots of temptations. Therefore, we need to learn about self-protection skills to keep ourselves safer. Another problem to face when living in big cities is that there is much pollution such as air pollution, water pollution,… In fact, it is very bad for our health when we inhaled vehicle fumes or accidentally touched dirty water. In conclusion, there are many problems of city life. We should apply lots of useful methods to reduce these issues efficiently and make our lives become more and more meaningful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 755, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n such as air pollution, water pollution,… In fact, it is very bad for our health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70491803279 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73018501922 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6358641334 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238309218426 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111851067345 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181412283878 0.0603063233224 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238309218426 0.12726935374 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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