Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish
Why do you think this is happening ?
What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, the amount of rubbish produced has increased significantly due to various factors. one key reason is the rise in consumerism, where people buy more goods than they need, often because of trends or advertising. this leads to increased waste, as many products are disposable or have short lifespans. Moreover, the packaging of goods, especially plastic and orther non-biodegradable, materials, contributes heavily to waste. Additionally, the growth of single-use items like plastic bottles, bags, and utensils has made it easier for people to dispose of items after only one use.
To address this issue, governments can take several steps. First, they can implement stricter regulations on packaging, requiring companies to use recyclable or biodegradable materials. For example, some countries have banned plastic bags and promoted reusable bags instead. Second, governments can create incentives for companies to design products that are durable and recyclable. Education campaigns are also essential to raise awareness about waste reduction among citizens. By encouraging people to recycle and reduce consumption, governments can help lower the amount of waste produced. In combination, these measures can make a significant impact on reducing rubbish and protecting the environment for future generations.
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- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienc 56
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83505154639 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13776566798 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711340206186 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.843957459 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16606085924 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567086865633 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477914644852 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119254754073 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272144074081 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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