The charts below show the percentage of students on an adult education centre taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about the rate of people on an older education centre taking courses from 1985 to now.
Overall, the percentage of people taking courses on an adult education centre of modern languages is highest among six areas. Meanwhile, music is not popular and lowest. However, we can see that clearly if we look at the specific declines.
Look at the pie chart in 1985, the percentage that people choose to studied about modern languages like French, Germany or Spanish was highest (24%). The second highest was fitness and dance (22%). Three courses had the stable and didn’t had many differences including art, cookery and local history ( 17%,14% and 15%). Music appreciation about 8%.
Look at the pie chart in now, the percentage and choosing of people have many changes. Firstly, they have new courses that is IT (27%) highest rate among five courses. Meanwhile, modern languages had significant reduced from 24% to 17%, not only languages but also have art when from 17% to 15%. Cookery higher than in 1985 ( 19%). Finally, have the stable percentage is fitness and dance ( 22%). So, it can be seen that. In this modern life, people likely join interesting courses and make they more comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40816576336 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2397757384 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170274128928 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560905491771 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759410117276 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134374247888 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072386290354 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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