Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year
To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Improving road safety is a growing concern in many countries, and some people believe that requiring drivers to take an annual driving test is the most effective solution. Personally, I partly concur with this opinion, while this idea has some merits, I believe it is not the most practical or efficient approach.
On the one hand, annual tests could help ensure that drivers stay updated with current transportation laws. This is because laws are constantly being changed and updated to keep up with the development of transport infrastructure and to minimize its limitations. Regular testing, therefore, not only serves as a reminder of the rules but also acts as a motivating force for citizens to learn and adopt new regulations. For instance, in Vietnam, to align with the alternation of population density and modern infrastructure, the new transport regulation has been published, thereby, retaking the driving test is a good way to keep the road users updated.
On the other hand, organizing annual tests does not thoroughly address road safety problems, and it also comes with certain drawbacks. From the documentation process to scheduling and conducting both theoretical and practical exams, the entire procedure could become a heavy burden on both the authorities and the drivers. The safety of the road transport actually depends on other subjective factors such as the road conditions or traffic density. Hence, the implication of annual driving test is not considered to be the most efficient.
In conclusion, while there are certain benefits from the annual driving test, in some cases, I do not believe it is the best way to improve road transport safety. A combination of targeted enforcement, public awareness, and infrastructure investment would likely be more practical and effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33101045296 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00298305396 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4008356131 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227865999163 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828782161685 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789316083548 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141631110868 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269113674931 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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