The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the rate of unemployed graduates at the age of 20-24 in term of gender, in a European nation between two years 2008 and 2009. The general overview here is that women were always exceeded by men in the percentage of unemployment.
To specify, after a drop from 10% in January 2008 to 8% in July 2008, the proportion of unemployed male graduates climbed sharply to 16% in October 2008, before a stable trend in the two months January 2009 and April 2009. Then, the rate went down to 11% in July 2009, followed by a rocket to 22% in the next month.
Similarly, the female g...
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on + month + year. like:
'on July 2008' not 'in July 2008'
in + year. like: in 2008
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.455 4.6
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
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