Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encourged as it is good for workers and employers.
The discussion about whether or not working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers is a very controversial one. There are people on both sides of the argument who have very strong feelings.
There are however some argument against this which I will discuss now. Firstly, office workers generally mantain their work and schedule on time in office rather than their home activities. They have to work on the office for a limited time only. But incase of doing official works at home, they may not be able to finish their work on time. For example, it is least possible to combine the works of official and home activities such as sleeping, cooking, eating, taking care of their child etc. on the same time. And if so, it happens, they will have to struggle with ambiguity and they might be considered as not finishing their works on time. Secondly, office is the suitable place for the workers and employers especially for attending on the meetings. Calling a meeting is not possible at home because it ruins the privacy of their family members.
A further point is that, workers and employers are sometime suggested to go outside or other cities for their work purpose. So, they must are having the chances of travelling and meeting with the new people. Also, by going outside or by side work, it develops the work experience which is necessary to exploring the knowledge as well.
In conclusion, I would like to state my opinion that I am in against the statement. I think what I have stated in this essay emphasizes this point and requires no more discussion.
they must are having the chances of travelling and meeting with the new people
they are having the chances of travelling and meeting with the new people
Sentence: In conclusion, I would like to state my opinion that I am in against the statement.
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Sentence: Firstly, office workers generally mantain their work and schedule on time in office rather than their home activities.
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Sentence: But incase of doing official works at home, they may not be able to finish their work on time.
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