Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Giving capital punishment has been a controversy for years. Some people believe that this kind of punishment is essential to apply because they believe criminals tend to repeat their crime as they live for it. However, some others believe that imprison criminals for quit long time will be better as it is more humane. At the same time, this punishment can make criminals get intimidated. Then, it can prevent them for repeating the same mistakes.
When a country omits the application of this punishment, the increasing of violence is one of problems which some people are worried about. Further,...
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon A new supermarket S is planned for the town The map shows possible sites for the supermarket 94
- One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. The developed nations in the world should tackle this problem by taking in more refugees. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? 90
- Migration 80
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 75
- The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Other believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what 83
Sentence: However, some others believe that imprison criminals for quit long time will be better as it is more humane.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to quit and long
will shows to its younger generations
will show to its younger generations
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 389 350
No. of Characters: 1786 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.441 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.591 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.426 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.913 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.934 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5