Write a letter to a friend inviting him/her to watch a movie that he/ she wanted to see.
Tell him/her
• What movie is it?
• Why do you think it might be interesting?
• Make arrangements to watch it together
Dear John Collins,
Hi there! I am fine and hope that this letter will find you in good health. Anyway, the purpose of this letter is to invite you to watch your favorite movie next part, ‘Transformer: The Age of Extinction’, next week with me. Please, allow me to elaborate more.
Firstly, I think that this movie will be very interesting, because all the other parts of it had a huge hit in the theaters in the past. Moreover, it is a 3-dimensional picture, and has lots of computer graphics effects in the actions. Additionally, a person, whom I met accidentally on the morning walk yesterday, told me that the story of this movie is superb. Therefore, we should see this picture.
Secondly, I have booked the tow tickets of the morning show of this movie in the Surya Cinema, which is 3 kilometers away from my residence. Furthermore, it is a beautiful theater and he has a high definition screen. For travelling to this picture hall, fortunately, my father’s motor bike is free that day. So, I have completed all the arrangements to see this film.
Finally, I hope that you will accept my proposal, and we will meet soon.
With lots of love,
James Smith.
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Comments
I have booked the two tickets
I have booked the two tickets of the morning show of this movie in the Surya Cinema.
Is it okay?
I have booked two tickets
I have booked two tickets for the morning show of this movie in the Surya Cinema //doesn't need 'the'
Hi there! I am fine and hope that this letter will find you in good health. Anyway, the purpose of this letter is to invite you to watch your favorite movie
I am writing this letter to invite you to watch your favorite movie //keep it simple. don't need the introduction
I have booked the tow tickets of the morning show of this movie in the Surya Cinema
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
my father’s motor bike is free that day.
my father’s motor bike is free on that day.
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.8 21.0
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Still you have grammar issues. Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 207 200
No. of Characters: 909 1000
No. of Different Words: 128 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.391 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.561 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.134 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4