People today move to new cities or new countries more than ever before what challenges do they experience? What strategies are there to meet challenges
Many people in the world always move to new cities or new countries more than ever before. AS many people know that the facilities in their hometown are not complete yet, so they move in other place to get complate facilities, the reason why people prefer to move is because of jobs in a big salary and comortable place.
The positif effect, they want to get jobs that are more comfortable. They will get a big salary in new company, they apply jobs easily to international company, they can get challeging in our life, they will struggle in life because they they will be able to adapt in life. They have many variety experiences in other place, they are refreshing if they felt bored for example the new cities, in capital city they like jakarta. In jakarta they can find so many tourism attarctions such as Taman Mini, Ancol, Monas, etc those are very beutifully.
The negatif effect The people move to new cities or countries difficult to get job like jakarta because jakarta is a big population. So they must compete to get job. If they difficult to adapt in new cities like jakarta they will be jobless.
The suggestion they should think postif and negatif effect if they hope move in a new cities or new countries because they must find the best of the best in the life, so just follow your heart and smart think before action, you must find the way having good solution in the life and making your life happy forever.
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they will be able to adapt in life
Sentence: Jakarta is capital city, in jakarta they can found so many tourism attarction such as Taman Mini, Ancol, Monas, etc that it is very beutifully.
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Suggestion: Refer to found
Sentence: If they difficult to adapt in new cities like jakarta they will be jobless.
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Sentence: Many people n the world always move to new cities or new countries more than ever before because the facility are not complete yet, so move in other place to get complate facility in other people prefer to move because of to getting job.
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Sentence: In a big salary and comortable place.
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Sentence: They move to new cities or new countries because they will get scholorship in develophep countries , such as united kingdom, United State, Europe, etc.
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Sentence: The positif effect, they will to get job that more comfortable.
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Sentence: They will get big salary in new company, they take it easy to apply international company, they can get challeging in our life, they will be struggle in life because they they will be able adapt in life.
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Sentence: Jakarta is capital city, in jakarta they can found so many tourism attarction such as Taman Mini, Ancol, Monas, etc that it is very beutifully.
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Sentence: In other hand the people like public society in indonesian countryhas mindset if they move to capital city like Jakarta or a big city in other place is easy to get comfortable job.
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Sentence: The negatif effect The people move to new cities or countries difficult to get job like jakarta because jakarta is a big population.
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Sentence: The suggestion they must think postif and negatif effect if they hope move in a new cities or new countries because they must find the best o the best in our life, so just follow yout heart and smart think before action, you must find they way having good solution in our life and making your life happy forever.
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