on the earth natural resorces is disappering why??
give the reasons or solutions!!
it goes without saying that,in the last few decade earth has become witnessed of the reduction of natural resources . however,industrilsation and globalisation are biggest factor responsible for reduction natural resorces like water,fossile fuel and air.
in the progress of globalisation countries are connected with each other for bussiness purpose and many other things. to illustrate, bussiness is important part of the every country economy.for this purpose transportion are used and it consume the petrolem . day by day fossile fuel are decreasing and it effect on economy.moreover, in 21 century world has become a industry hub.all countries are devloping industries more and more .in industres fossile fuel are redused . however, population also is responsible for reduction . to illaborate ,in the whole world population are increasing rapidly .they use natural resources a lot . they poluted the air and water
there are many way to solve this problem. some people argue that they think about the safe natural resorces .they can aware the population about saving life natural . moreover,they can growth the forest for natural balance . they say fossile fuel are used in limit
in conclusion. i firmly belive that if we use natural resources carefully. we can safe the natural resorces . because these are essential espect of our life
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earth has become witnessed of the reduction of natural resources
the earth has witnessed the reduction of natural resources
transportion are used and it consume the petrolem
transportation is used and it consumes the petrolem
and it effect on economy
and it affects on economy
there are many way to solve this problem.
there are many ways to solve this problem.
we can safe the natural resorces .
we can save the natural resources .
Sentence: it goes without saying that,in the last few decade earth has become witnessed of the reduction of natural resources . however,industrilsation and globalisation are biggest factor responsible for reduction natural resorces like water,fossile fuel and air.
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Sentence: in the progress of globalisation countries are connected with each other for bussiness purpose and many other things. to illustrate, bussiness is important part of the every country economy.for this purpose transportion are used and it consume the petrolem . day by day fossile fuel are decreasing and it effect on economy.moreover, in 21 century world has become a industry hub.all countries are devloping industries more and more .in industres fossile fuel are redused . however, population also
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Sentence: is responsible for reduction . to illaborate ,in the whole world population are increasing rapidly .they use natural resources a lot . they poluted the air and water
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Sentence: there are many way to solve this problem. some people argue that they think about the safe natural resorces .they can aware the population about saving life natural . moreover,they can growth the forest for natural balance . they say fossile fuel are used in limit
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Sentence: in conclusion. i firmly belive that if we use natural resources carefully. we can safe the natural resorces . because these are essential espect of our life
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