Some say that young people are not suitable for decision-making positions in governments; others, however, disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this technological era, many youngsters playing decision making role in all the profession. Many believe that young people should not be considered for decision making position in government while others oppose it. In my point of view, young people should be allowed to take part in decision making role in government to get accurate and remarkable success in all the fields.
Youngster brings innovative ideas in technology revolution. For example, one of the Facebook co-founder Mark Zuckerberg was worked as Chief Executive Officer (CEO) incorporated many innovative ideas and taken many decisions in Facebook development and become great success. It proves that youngster have developed skill to handle hard decisions. So that they can also participate in government's decision making role.
On the other hand, senior people have experience and knowledge to tackle challenging and important conclusions in government sectors. For instance, Indian BJP(Bharathiya Janatha Party) led government under Prime Minister of India Narendra Modi have more experience in leadership as well as decision making skill taking innovative decision to tackle declining Indian economy. He was worked as chief Minister of Gujarat for several times and famous for the Gujarat state development.
To conclude, youngster should be considered for decision making position in government who can bring ground breaking decisions by using latest technology will useful in government. Moreover, youngsters who are intelligent and precise in their judgment should be allowed to take part in government.
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many youngsters playing decision making role in all the profession
many youngsters are playing decision making role in all the profession
and become great success
and become great successful
It proves that youngster have developed skill to handle hard decisions.
It proves that youngsters have developed skills to handle hard decisions.
Indian BJP(Bharathiya Janatha Party) led government under Prime Minister of India Narendra Modi have more experience in leadership
Indian BJP(Bharathiya Janatha Party) led government under Prime Minister of India Narendra Modi who has more experience in leadership
youngster should be considered for decision making position in government who can bring ground breaking decisions by using latest technology will useful in government
youngster should be considered for decision making position in government who can bring ground breaking decisions by using latest technology which will be useful in government
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