Some people think that students, in or outside the school, should be prepared for the competitions. Others think competition is not good for children.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Survival of fittest is an unwritten rule which prevails since the existence of universe and introducing the same environment to kids in terms of competition becomes a sensitive topic. Few profoundly disagrees this concept as it would create complexes at child's mind, nevertheless few welcomes this trend. Out of the both view, I support for competitions , because this essentially equips the skills of the children and these views are presented in this essay.
Sensible Socialists and even few psychiatrists perceives that indulging a kid in competition would affect the children psyche. This is...
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