You want to learn a foreign language for work purposes from a teacher in your locality. Write a letter to him/her and say
- Explain the reason for learning.
- How will it help with your work?
- Ask a few details about the course.
- How did you hear about him/her?
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the two weeks course of learning French language from your institution.
At the outset, please note that I am working in French Republican Associates and recently, have been promoted to the post of senior sales manager. During the course of my work, I get to interact with lot of French people, who are supposed to be my clients also. Since, I am a career oriented person, so learning this language will not only help me in better communication with clients but it will also help me to travel in many parts of the European countries, with ease to expand the sales of the company that will in-turn be beneficial for my career.
Nevertheless, last week, during the discussion over coffee, a friend of mine recommended me your name who by the way is already engaged in a six week's course. However, I am through with Novice level and want to go ahead with the advance level. Moreover, I would also like to enquire about the course duration, the curriculum that I will be covering and lastly, the cost of the programme.
I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your help and cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Hiten
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a friend of mine recommended me your name who by the way is already engaged in a six week's course.
a friend of mine who by the way is already engaged in a six week's course recommended me your name.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 209 200
No. of Characters: 931 1000
No. of Different Words: 123 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.455 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.459 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.605 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.76 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4