You want to learn a foreign language for work purposes from a teacher in your locality. Write a letter to him/her and say
- Explain the reason for learning.
- How will it help with your work?
- Ask a few details about the course.
- How did you hear about him/her?
Dear Paul,
I am John working as a Senior Software Engineer in Chennai. Currently, my company got a new French client so we are going to create french website development. For that client support and interaction for the project is assigned to me. So my management suggested me to learn the French language so that it will be very useful for me in upcoming project. So I like to join your French training class. It will be significantly helpful to develop a French based website and also the client interaction.
I want more information about French so that I can spend more time for the class in weekends. Can you specify the duration and timings of the course and fees. My colleague recommended me to join under your teaching. Since I was working I can attend on weekends. What are the materials I should bring for the class.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John.
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flaws:
No. of Words: 158 200
a lot of 'so' in the essay
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 711 1000
No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.404 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.606 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4