In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

There is no doubt that nowadays in some countries youth are pushed to work or travel particularly in the period before beginning the university study. In fact there are many cons and pros for that attitude, however personally I do believe that positives outweigh the negatives.

Some people claim that allowing younger students to work or travel before finishing their university period will inevitably wast their time. Besides, this will expose them to problems and challenges beyond their level.The people who stand behind this assert believe that there are two crucial periods for every human-be...

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