Advertisement plays a major role on TV in developed market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people are critical of the role of TV advertising. Write an essay analyzing the positive and negative effects of TV advertisement
It can not be denied that tv has become one of indispensable thing in almost every family. Going with the development of tv is a huge industry about the advertisement with many arguments around it. Some people think advertisement brings a lot of positive effects on society in general and to the economy in specific. On the other hand, some people argue that commercial on tv can bring bad influence on people. In this essay, I will analyze both side arguments.
Firstly, advertisement can bring information to customers about the products, and it leads to the fact that people can enhance their quality of life. Without promotion, the customers will never know about the new products, and oppositely, with the proper promotion, customers will see the existence of new products and information about it. These promotion campaigns bring the benefits not only to the suppliers but also to the customers. With the newest updated products going with the information, people are likely to stay in a great chance to buy suitable products for them. Obviously, these suitable products will improve society's quality of life.
Secondly, with more information about the products, people tend to buy more, and it creates chances for the economy to grow by the increasing demand. Needless to say, people will buy more when they see interesting products even they may not use it. Have you ever come to the mall, and want to buy many beautiful things, and end up you never touch on it? To the side of consumers, it can be bad, but if you look up at the economy side, this will be a positive side. The demand increases will lead to higher economic growth and lower unemployment problem. As a result, society as a whole will benefit from the higher demand coming from advertisement on TV.
Even the undeniable benefits, there are some drawbacks that people should concern about. Although advertisements can give consumers a lot of information, these information are not always correct. The producers sometimes give not real images or information, so the customers are likely to desire it. More seriously, there were some illegal activities that happened on TV. With naive customers, scammers can take a lot of money and not give any products back. The information can be useful, but sometimes people have to consider it very carefully about the truth.
Another drawback from the advertisement is appropriate information to different groups of people. There is diversity type of ads with many products. As a result, advertisements for adult products can appear when kids watch TV. Needless to say, there are some contents that children should not watch at that age, and it may affect the kid's consciousness about events around them. For example, kids can think the cigarette is good when watching the advertisements from it. So when they grow up, they are likely to try it just because they think the cigarette is good. This can be a serious problem if adults do not guide the kids correctly
In conclusion, advertisement can be good and bad for society at the same time. It can be useful for people watching it with the needed products and reasonable budget. Therefore, the demand of the economy can increase and leads to some benefits to the economy, such as lower unemployment. However, we can not reject the drawbacks of advertisements like misleading information or scamming. The positive or negative effect of advertisements will be based on how people use information from that.
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- Advertisement plays a major role on TV in developed market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people are critical of the role of TV advertising. Write an essay analyzing the positive and negative effects of TV advertisement 61
- Advertisement plays a major role on TV in developed market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people are critical of the role of TV advertising. Write an essay analyzing the positive and negative effects of TV advertisement 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 7.85571142285 356% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2899.0 1615.20841683 179% => OK
No of words: 582.0 315.596192385 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98109965636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83436053226 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432989690722 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 916.2 506.74238477 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2232783924 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8484848485 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93939393939 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178781129668 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550713112532 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514177004809 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114816009108 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069361412347 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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