Now, The Internet are big social network. It's help human connect with together. For example, we share some ideas. This is the benefits of the Internet. However, the Internet is danger. One of day, You turn on facebook and see your profile. What's happen? Friend on the Facebook tag you and say everyone: "You're the suck!" With image and video tell bad behavior of you. Oh no! That's not true. But too late. You wanna tell someone it's wrong. And nobody truth you. That's all! I wanna tell everyone, the Internet have advantage and disadvantages. Be careful when use the Internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 485.0 1615.20841683 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 101.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80198019802 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17015387972 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46969674645 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 176.041082164 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722772277228 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 153.0 506.74238477 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 7.0 20.2975951904 34% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5118128043 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 37.3076923077 106.682146367 35% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 7.76923076923 20.7667163134 37% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147539256004 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542651719938 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768763939609 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147539256004 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.0946893788 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.83 50.2224549098 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 2.5 9.78957915832 26% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.8 10.1190380762 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 10.7795591182 46% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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