Benefits of travelling.
People often say that traveling is very beneficial for each of us and I completely agree with this opinion. First of all, the health benefits that you gain after each trip are huge: reduce stress, reduce the risk of heart disease, increase the flexibility of bones and joints. Traveling also helps you reduce stress caused by work, study or other life problems. In addition, travel enhances your understanding of other cultures. Also, travelling cans enhance your creativity, travelling introduces novelty to your brain and improves cognition. Besides, travelling also helps you expand social relationships, especially when you have the opportunity to travel and meet foreign friends. And finally, travelling gives you lifelong memories. Your travel diary will be thicker and thicker thanks to the memories that each trip brings, so that when you look back later, you won't feel like a waste of your youth because you lived and traveled to the fullest. For these reasons, I think traveling brings a lot of benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1001, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: I
...eled to the fullest. For these reasons, I I think traveling brings a lot of benefit...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, look, so, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15294117647 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64355323427 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.343166305 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351055002211 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143749018976 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388200083471 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351055002211 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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