Beside the benefits of the techonology , it is also has impacted people quite a lot of .
there are several limitation on technology which people are being impacted very much. when modern devices come along, it is the time for people to have virtual friends more. It means loneliness are slowly tied to our life while the numbers of friends are extremely large .Beside that each of persons is coming lazy and dependent on the available machines because of its quickness. the mobilization is very minimal with the support of technologies even with simple things such as going out or doing exercise. A serious problems that when the technology has developed in a breakthrough, cyberciminal use high-tech software to commit fraud as well as other illegal activities. In the early 2019, the Ministry of Public Security seized 4 objects who take control of hundreds of websites, steal information data, illegally penetrate the server systems of some enterprises.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... going out or doing exercise. A serious problems that when the technology has developed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 140.0 315.596192385 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80611576994 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.852783502 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745979841803 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382318071362 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483558025434 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745979841803 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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