Probably, unemployment is becoming an increasingly considerable malice over the recent years.The reasons behind this phenomenon are manifold which affect the individuals and society tremendously.This essay will suggest a handful of initiatives to be taken to ameliorate the situation.
To commence, above all the causes engendering this hindrance,the first and foremost is illiteracy which becomes a significant hurdle in acquiring a white collar job to the scholars which leads a person to suffer from a miserable life.Moreover,such a person can not put its contribution to the devlopment of an ideal society.The people in Nepal despite thinking of the progress of the economy of the nation,instead they ,merely,ponder about their personl expences like food, shelter and other basic amenities, for instance.
Probing further,the another factor to be taken into account is malpractices prevalent in the state as the political power is in corrupt hands and they either utilise the public funding for personl lavish lifestyle and luxury cars which is to be used for remunerations of the government employees or they use it unwisely.Hence,thus cause for failure of government that does not commence with the recruitment procedure.Consequently, the youngsters tend to migerate to the Western countries from Eastern countries particularly.
However,to curb this menace,people should educate their children until they are not of fourteen as per govenment norms.If the would implement this tendency,socielty would definitely flourish in terms of wealth and economic prosperity.Furthermore,government should distribute the public funding in such a way that everyone should have as much as wages that they could fulfill fundament requirements of their menage. Regardless of these remedies, regime should also be accountable for ensuring an economy which provide all fundamental rights regarding work and enjoyment of payable salary.
In conclusion,administrative authorities and general publish should join hand to hand to overcome this epidemic before spreading.
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- Causes and solutions of the unemployment 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97114453135 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636666666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.895271198 49.4020404114 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.5 106.682146367 276% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 20.7667163134 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0521434307714 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022352508416 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233100638822 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0268230100992 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230676956378 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.0946893788 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.77 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.7 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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