companies are using many creative ways to help products become more popular

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companies are using many creative ways to help products become more popular

Nowadays, many companies are using creative ways to advertise their products. The ' Dien may xanh' company made an exciting song to introduce products to customers. this song become popular on TV and social network. Another way which some companies often use to advertise is give their products for everyone to try at supermarkets. this helps improve sales for company. Besides, Lotteria sticks advertisements at bus stop or on street to people know about it. In conclusion there are many ways that companies make their products become popular.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve ways to advertise their products. The Dien may xanh company made an exciting s...
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Suggestion: This
...ong to introduce products to customers. this song become popular on TV and social ne...
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... Another way which some companies often use to advertise is give their products for...
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...ts for everyone to try at supermarkets. this helps improve sales for company. Beside...
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Suggestion: Ghjygkkutxjyesnnjktssvbnkurf
...es make their products become popular. ghjygkkutxjyesnnjktssvbnkurf bjyxs cdgjvdyjvse hhyyn ytdh uujvd rrf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, may, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 538.0 1615.20841683 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 99.0 315.596192385 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43434343434 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.15434214553 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49550413069 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.787878787879 0.561755894193 140% => OK
syllable_count: 159.3 506.74238477 31% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9016238507 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.25 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.375 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412702757329 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166484419924 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15703253876 0.0667982634062 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145885132467 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.206312732883 0.056905535591 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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