The Debate of Workplace Surveillance
In fabric exhibition room, there are linens, mixed yarns, silk, pure wool, cotton were ordered by many business person
now, instead of Chinese women who interested in cheongsam, women in the world too because it showed their “curve”.
Wide bell bottom pants and large paint which used to be favorited, now it is become to legging.
I think mixed yarns which use for sew paints are better because you don’t need to iron your paint after washing.
Normal, cheongsam there are 2 split lines each tails so too easy to do activities and easy to shows slim legs of women.
Everyone believe that collar is play an important role of shirt. so that, we have to consider customer’s face when we design their shirt.
if you are fat, you shouldn’t choose pleated skirts, Flared skirt and large dress. Color of skirt shouldn’t be pale and shirt shouldn’t have horizontal stripes because it make you fatter
Each woman who has own opinion about clothes which they should wear. However, if you want to more beautiful, you should know basic theories of clothes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...to shows slim legs of women. Everyone believe that collar is play an important role o...
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Line 6, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...lar is play an important role of shirt. so that, we have to consider customer&apos...
^^
Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...os;s face when we design their shirt. if you are fat, you shouldn't choose ...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...os;t have horizontal stripes because it make you fatter Each woman who has own opi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02209944751 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70788129436 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718232044199 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7151042313 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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