describe a journey you made where you learned something new

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
Well, Im going to talk about an excursion which ...
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Suggestion: wasn't
...d forward about this trip. Actually, it wasnt disappointed for me. ^^^^^
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Suggestion: I'm
...19.36px;'> Lan is stunning, Im really broadening my horizons and attra...
^^
Line 1, column 644, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'include'.
Suggestion: include
...heap. As well, I saw a lot of people to includes local and overseas people when I went s...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...erseas people when I went sight-seeing. they are very intimate and wonderful, we cre...
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Suggestion: Besides
...reated plenty of intrigue conversation. besides that, Im experienced different cultures...
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Suggestion: I'm
...of intrigue conversation. besides that, Im experienced different cultures and trad...
^^
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Suggestion: I'd
... and destroy natural habitats. Finally, Id like to say that  ^^
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Suggestion: I've
...for me. I think it was the best journey Ive ever made.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, look, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, well, i think, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77981651376 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.68088642809 2.80592935109 167% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669724770642 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.3348121679 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0324296605175 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169342474397 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417256346215 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324296605175 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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