Essay topics:
A destination
Da Nang is one of the most attractive destinations for tourists thanks to its natural and cultural beauty. First of all, visitors can enjoy many beautiful landscapes such as Son Tra Peninsula, Ba Na Hill, especially My Khe Beach. The beach is famous for fresh atmosphere and blue water. You will feel very comfortable when coming here. Secondly, Da Nang is popular for cuisine. There is a lot of special food, for example, Mi Quang, Bun cha ca, Banh Xeo,…. Besides, it is also known as a paradise of seafood. The best thing about Da Nang is friendly people. If you need help, they are pleased to help you do anything. In conclusion, Da Nang is a great place to relax and get an insight into its culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Da Nang is one of the most attractive de...
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... example, Mi Quang, Bun cha ca, Banh Xeo,…. Besides, it is also known as a paradis...
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...endly people. If you need help, they are pleased to help you do anything. In conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 578.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 128.0 315.596192385 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.515625 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54639566041 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.765625 0.561755894193 136% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 506.74238477 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0578203233 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.8 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0589846649129 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0201194675585 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603584026755 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589846649129 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.0946893788 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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