Essay topics:
An email: A trip with your class
Hi Billal,
How are you?
Last week, I went on a trip with my classmate. We went to the park in the north city where have the ancient trees and many small squirrels.
The students held a picnic in which we had some activities. Each of us brought local food and handled a game. We shared food and played games which help us to know more about classmates.
If you have a chance to go there, I recommence you should bring food and enjoy your time with some activities.
See you
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 391.0 1615.20841683 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 91.0 315.596192385 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2967032967 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.08859061939 4.20363070211 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28354715524 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 176.041082164 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 115.2 506.74238477 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9508900502 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.8571428571 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929478724081 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367593129321 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663576031994 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702445409225 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497929305743 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 50.2224549098 167% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.77 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 78.4519038076 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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