Essay topics:
family
I’m glad to introduce about my family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My father’s name is Hoà. His job is making and repairing keys. My mother is Duyen. She’s a housewife. My brother is Khoa. He’s a student at Vo Thi Sau high school. At weekends, we always spend time together. We usually have dinner and talk about our week. We sometimes go picnic and go to the cinema. Although my parents are busy, they always take care of us. I love my family very much. I’m happy to be lived in my family.
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 476.0 1615.20841683 29% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 107.0 315.596192385 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44859813084 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47693526664 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 176.041082164 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691588785047 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 153.9 506.74238477 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 7.0 20.2975951904 34% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 11.9379879191 49.4020404114 24% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 31.7333333333 106.682146367 30% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 7.13333333333 20.7667163134 34% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.4 7.06120827912 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0454097029183 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223450495552 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083607519726 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454097029183 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.1 13.0946893788 24% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.29 50.2224549098 162% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 11.3001002004 33% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.87 12.4159519038 47% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 2.5 9.78957915832 26% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.8 10.1190380762 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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