Food for students about continuing to use pork (pig)
Due to cholera outbreaks in African, Sakura Kindergarten has suspended use of pork and pork products on the menu to make sure health for students from March 16, 2019.
So far, the cholera outbreak controlled, almost no new outbreaks appear.
Food suppliers for Fresco students have many measures to control the source of pork on farms to make sure that no contamination is present, the slaughter process performed in modern lines, ISO standards 22000: 2005.
Therefore, starting on April 22, 201 Sakura Kindergarten started using pork and pork products (pigs). In the beginning, pork and pork products will use with a frequency of 2 dishes/week, then continue to check and gradually increase to use as a normal menu.
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2019-04-19 | Ngoc Kaylee | 22 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 600.0 1615.20841683 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 315.596192385 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08474576271 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 4.20363070211 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78595814206 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 176.041082164 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 171.9 506.74238477 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6383254068 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327636882941 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157727097624 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859897751024 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162968413407 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989385946931 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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