gene technology
This was a newly technology that arose these years. The individuals who benefitted from it were in mounting numbers. Nevertheless, this technology existed the problem of ethnic and moral standard to a certain extent. Did it unlock pandora’s box or aladdin’s magic lamp?
It was claimed that the genetically modified human beings: twin girls whose dna he said he altered, noting that it is the world first one that a Chinese scientist had declared that he assisted in making it. it triggered off an enormous earthquake in the science field and set off a storm of public opinions. In detail, the twins’ genes had been edited, which enabled them to protect from HIV by birth. The bombshell scientific breakthrough, provided that verified, would represent the first genetically engineered humans. also, it might be said without fear of exaggerate that it would be a milestone in the history of science. And this finding could have symbolic implications for how we clung to the idea that whether the research of gene technology should be limited further or not.
More than 120 scholars from prestigious universities strongly condemned the research in a signed statement, saying it lacks effective ethics oversight and amounts to human experiments. us" style="margin: 0px; line-height: 150%; font-size: 12pt;">The opponents were right. Undoubtedly speaking, it was inevitable that this finding would run counter to the academic ethics and standards which was attributed to the unassured security of the project. If not permitted, this technology would disrupt everyone’s unique gene.
Everything is reflected in two aspects, so does the gene technology. gene technology also has its strengths: it can enhance the quality of the agricultural and sideline products. For instance, the peas’ shape and properties contain “not disease-resistant but short-stem plants” and “disease-resistant but high-stem ones”. By altering the expression of genes rather than their dna sequences, we can get newly and desirable strains of seeds. Moreover, gene technology helps produce cloned animal for reaping tangible benefits. Take Dolly the Sheep, the first cloned animal, for example. In 1996, scientists in England pulled it off by using nuclear transfer. They can use cloned animals to produce the pharmaceutical protein, whose cost is cheaper than that of bioengineering drugs produced by fermentation technology. Additionally, it may transform human’s lifestyles and prompt the global economy to progress at an exceedingly fast speed. Just as the McKinsey Company predicts that, next generation genome will be one of the twelve disruptive technologies in the near future.
Gene technology has been the cutting edge of the science and the peak of the biology for a long time, whose road leads to the unknown future. we may step into the abyss when a careless behavior happens. gene editing is like pandora’s box. Once opened, no one can guarantee the consequences. but we need not panic over the gene editing, let alone rage by ignorance. we should acquire more about technology science and measure the world with our knowledge to broaden our perspectives on the gene technology.
All in all, gene technology is a two-edged weapon. Therefore, it is hard to judge that gene editing for infant open pandora’s box or aladdin’s magic lamp. gene technology itself is amoral. it can either serve or hurt us. how we use it depends on ourselves. With guarding ourselves from the urge to abuse excessive power, we need to develop its strengths and discard its weaknesses as far as possible.
opinion on gene technology?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3648.0 1615.20841683 226% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 618.0 315.596192385 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90291262136 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.80968559033 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 342.0 176.041082164 194% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1058.4 506.74238477 209% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.3734833435 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5945945946 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7027027027 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45945945946 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245453423243 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110793170817 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16508876163 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222569529435 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205365952053 0.056905535591 361% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 184.0 78.4519038076 235% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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